Thriller Treatment ( New)

My thriller starts off with two knives on the floor and some fingerless gym gloves  then gradually the camera rises up upon the main character and we see him twitching and moving about in his bed as if he is having some sort of nightmare, there is then a cut to outside where we can see it is dark and we then see somebody running across fast dressed in all black and a quick flash on a sign that has the word "Danger" written on it and it then jumps back to the boy in his bedroom as he is woken up by these nightmares and is just sitting up straight facing forwards with his head down rubbing his hands together then suddenly sharply looking up and forwards to giving the audience a jump, after that  he looks up towards a fan that seems as if it is irritating him so he gets up to go and turn it off and then reaches for some knives on the desk ( not the ones we see at the beginning) and put them into  his bag he will then put on his jacket and head out. We used the technique of match on action to film the boy leaving his room going down the stairs and leaving his house . As the boy leaves his house we see a camera angle from around the corner peeking round on him as if he is being followed by somebody and the boy is walking off through an alley way and in the background we see a dark figure dressed in all black just standing there with his hands crossed and we cannot see his face  building up tension leaving the audience thinking what will happen. Finally as the boy is walking through the alley  there will be a point of view shot on the attacker creeping up on the boy and as he gets close the boy stops turns his head slightly and then the attacker slams his hand on the boys shoulder then there will be a blackout with the name of the thriller coming up shortly after.